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2018/01/29 来源:瀚森教育 分享按钮

写作的框架是作文的骨架

摘要  

文章不仅要有丰富的内容,还要有完善的框架,才能支撑起一个文章的形,对雅思作文也是一样。

一、1:2(中间对方观点一段,自己的两段)共五段    

        * 第一段 

        第一句:点题—定义题目中的关键词,要想让考官看不出模板的痕迹,这一点尤为重要,可以用:   

        * 赞扬的口吻 

        例如:wearing uniforms has become an effective way to solve school problems 

        可选用以下一些句式(完全可以用自己的): 

        * Thanks to /At the mercy of the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology, there are rapid changes in all aspects of our everyday lives. 

        * With the (rapid, marked, amazing, eye-catching, remarkable, fantastic) development/ progress/ growth/ advance/ improvement of economy/ society/ industry/ living standard, „     * While the rhythm/ pace/ tempo of people’s living is speeding up, „     * As living tempo/ pace quickens, „ 

        * Nowadays/in this day and age/,  ____ play/fill a vital/ leading/ educational/ indispensable/ supervisory  + role/ part in „     * Nowadays/in this day and age/, _____ produce/exert/ 

positive/active/profound/far-reaching + effects/impacts/influences on____ 

        *  或者从所背的表‘正面“的词组中选择     * 批评的口吻 

        例如:  it is reported uniforms has made school life dull and monotonous 

        可选用以下一些句式: 

        * Nowadays/in this day and age/, _____ produce/exert/ negative/adverse/baneful + effects/impacts/influences on ____     * 或者从所背的表‘负面“的词组中选择     * 中立的口吻 

        例如:it is common that student attend to school in uniforms        

        可选用以下一些句式: 

        * it is quite common/ it is not uncommon that     * it is a striking fact that 

        * there is growing tendency for sb to do sth     * it is widely noted that     * it is well aware that 

        * it is a well-established fact that 

        第二句:提出疑问: However/nevertheless/nonetheless/whereas  或者     therefore /consequently/accordingly 

        *  如果题目中给出一方观点,用whether 引出,例如:whether smoking should be banned totally          或者 

        * 如果题目中给出的事两方观点,用特殊疑问句的陈述语序完成,例如(which factor can determine a nation’s success)        切记:要进行题目的改写(词汇或结构) 

        * Has become a hot topic/has been drown to public’s attention/has become the focus of public concern/has become the limelight of our day-to-day life 

        第三句:自己观点  

        * I still adhere to/stick to/cling to/nurture/commit to (坚持) the opinion/belief/notion(观点)_____ 

        * My firmly/staunchly(坚定) held the opinion/belief/notion(观点) is______ 

        *  第二段 :对方观点 

          o Is has been said rightly(适度地)_____ 

          o It has been admitted(承认) to a certain extent(在一定程度上)_______           o There, for certain, are some risks(风险)/benefits(好处) from sth/doing sth 

          o It is conceivable (可想而知)_______ 

          o It is quite easy to find the reason to attack„./ to exalt/glorify/praise that o Those who have already benefited from practicing___ sing high praise of it  

        * 第三段 :自己观点1 

        However/nevertheless/nonetheless(但是)/notwithstanding 尽管如此/in spite of these 

        * The research, relating to (和„ 相关= about, concerning) has highlighted that ______(和„..相关的调查强调„.)     * It is hazardous(危险的)/ridiculous/ludicrous(可笑的) to lose sight of/be blind to (忽略)(如果忽略。。。 是很危险/可笑的)     * It has been proved that ______(事实已经证明了。。。) 

        * There still exist some risks(风险)/hazards/dangers(危险)或benefits(好处) in doing sth(在做。。。上还是也些好处或风险的)      * 第四段 :自己观点2 

        Rather/in addition/additionally/also/still(此外)  

        * It is improper/ inappropriate(不合适的)/erroneous(错误的) if we regard/consider/take/treat(认为) it flawless/faultless/blameless/perfect(无可挑剔的)或 incurable(无可就药的)/intolerable(无法忍受的) 

        * It turns out to be a short-sighted(目光短浅的)/mischievous(有害的)或wise/sagacious(明智的) policy 

        * It is no exaggeration (夸张) to say that___(说什么也不夸张)     * 第五段:结尾(重复观点+精彩论据的重复) 

        In conclusion/ultimately/in the final analysis (总而言之),  

        * It is no hard job/task/feat to arrive at the conclusion/reach the overwhelming consensus(达成一致)________     * All the analyses justify(使„合理) a sound (站得住脚的)conclusion that 

        * The evidence upon all points to (以上的证据都指向...)     * All the evidence justifies an unshakable view that „ 

        * All the evidence supports an unmistakable conclusion that „

二、 1:1 折中(中间一方观点一段,另一方的观点一段)共四段    

        * 第一段 

        第一句:点题—定义题目中的关键词,要想让考官看不出模板的痕迹,这一点尤为重要,可以用:   

        * 赞扬的口吻 

        例如:wearing uniforms has become an effective way to solve school problems 

        可选用以下一些句式(完全可以用自己的): 

        * Thanks to /At the mercy of the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology, there are rapid changes in all aspects of our everyday lives.     

        * With the (rapid, marked, amazing, eye-catching, remarkable, fantastic) development/ progress/ growth/ advance/ improvement of economy/ society/ industry/ living standard,     

        * While the rhythm/ pace/ tempo of people’s living is speeding up,     * As living tempo/ pace quickens, „ 

        * Nowadays/in this day and age/,  ____ play/fill a vital/ leading/ educational/ indispensable/ supervisory  + role/ part in „ * Nowadays/in this day and age/, _____ produce/exert/ 

positive/active/profound/far-reaching + effects/impacts/influences on ____

        *  或者从所背的表‘正面“的词组中选择    

        * 批评的口吻 

        例如:  it is reported uniforms has made school life dull and monotonous 

        可选用以下一些句式: 

        * Nowadays/in this day and age/, _____ produce/exert/ negative/adverse/baneful + effects/impacts/influences on ____     * 或者从所背的表‘负面“的词组中选择   

        * 中立的口吻 

        例如:it is common that student attend to school in uniforms         可选用以下一些句式: 

        * it is quite common/ it is not uncommon that     * it is a striking fact that 

        * there is growing tendency for sb to do sth     * it is widely noted that     * it is well aware that 

        * it is a well-established fact that 

        第二句:提出疑问: However/nevertheless/nonetheless/whereas  或者    therefore/consequently/accordingly 

        *  如果题目中给出一方观点,用whether 引出,例如:whether smoking should be banned totally          或者 

        * 如果题目中给出的事两方观点,用特殊疑问句的陈述语序完成,例如(which factor can determine a nation’s success)        切记:要进行题目的改写(词汇或结构) 

        * Has become a hot topic/has been drown to public’s attention/has become the focus of public concern/has become the limelight of our day-to-day life 

        第三句:正方/一方观点 

        *  Some people say/believe/deem/reckon(认为)______ 

        * It is believed/held/considered/deemed/reckoned(认为)reasonably (合理地)/understandably(可以理解) that ____________(有人这么认为也是合理/可以理解的) 

        第四句:反方/另外一方观点 

        *  Others/some argue/claim/maintain/challenge(挑战)/take it for granted(把„当成想当然)______     

        第五句:自己的观点 

        Personally/personally speaking/as I see it/from my perspective     * The two factors/elements/considerations(因素) are intrinsically/basically(本质上) interdependent(相互依赖的) and indispensable(缺一不可的) 

        * The two sides are supported by well-grounded reasons     * There is an element of truth in the both sides     * 第二段 :一方观点(好)      On the one hand, 

        *  ___ play/fill(发挥) vital/crucial(重要的)/leading(首屈一指)/significant(意义重大的) role/part(作用) in ___( 。。。在„ 方面发挥了重要的/首屈一指/意义重大的作用) 

        * ___ have/exert/produce/impose(发挥) profound/far-reaching effects/influences/impacts on___(。。。在„方面产生了深远的影响      

        * 第三段 :另一方观点(好)      On the other hand,     * ___ has been proved to be the most determinant(决定性的) factor („已经证明是个决定性的因素) 

        * Much adequacy can be found in „.(在„.方面也可以找到合理性)   

        * 第四段:结尾(重复观点+精彩论据的重复) 

          o  On balance, _____ and ____ do play/fill equally important role in ____ (从平衡角度来看,__ and ___ 的确发挥了同样重要的作用)

三、一面倒:共五段 

* 第一段与第五段与1:2完全相同     

* 第二段 :自己观点1 

          o The foremost reason rest on/relies on(在于) the fact that (最重要的原因就在于这个事实)  

* 第三段 :自己观点2          o Another subtle explanation is ____(另一个不明显的理由是)    

 * 第四段:自己观点3 

         o The last convincing reason I would like to mention is____(我想提及的最后一个有说服力的理由是____)

 
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